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[Elaine]

Thanks again, Erin the new copy looks really cool .

Would y'all please look at my site, and comment here my Small Business Forum Website Review

[chetzuru]

Whew! I have been so busy these past few weeks...thanks for your patience while I got this next "Before & After" project done!

This one is a tri-fold brochure, which is why I indicate, in the copy, "Cover" verbiage and "Interior" copy. I look forward to your feedback!

- E


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COVER:

Derby’s Pet Fence

Freedom and Safety for your Pets, Peace of Mind for You


INTERIOR COPY:

Why an in-ground pet fence?

- Peace of mind knowing your pet will not stray into the road.

- Your dog will enjoy more freedom than being contained on a leash or tied to a post.

- No more late night or rainy day walks.

- Keep an open landscape without the need for fencing.

- A very affordable option!

- Keeps the neighbors happy!

- Dogs can be trained in just a few weeks.

- Solution for subdivisions that don’t allow visible fencing.

- Keep your dog out of gardens or pool areas.

- Let your dog have access to the front yard also!

Freedom & Safety for your Pets, Peace of Mind for You.

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Derby’s Pet Fence is locally owned and operated. We are proud to support other organizations that promote responsible pet ownership, such as the Woodstock Animal Foundation (www.woostockaf.org) and The Shamrock Foundation (www.shamrockpets.com). We are a local business that handles all aspects of your sale and installation. Give your dog the freedom and safety that he deserves.

Call us at:
(502) 314-7398
www.derbysfence.com

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Frequently Asked Questions:

Isn’t this fencing cruel?
Our systems give the dog an audible signal BEFORE a shock is received. Your dog will
quickly learn to avoid the correction after initial training. The correction administered
by our products are mild - they are often compared to a strong static shock you might
get after walking across a carpet. With proper training, your dog may not need to receive
the shock more than a few times before understanding where the boundaries are.

Will this system work for all dogs?
Almost all dogs can be successfully trained to stay safely in their yard with our systems.
There are a few breeds or circumstances that may need special consideration. We will discuss your situation with you before we begin any installation.

Can dogs of all ages be trained with this system?
Your dog must be at least six months old. And, yes, you can teach an older dog to stay within your yard.

Will the installation damage my lawn?
We use specialized equipment that minimizes any damage to your lawn. In most cases, you will find it hard to see where the installation occurred in just a few days.

Can more than one dog share the same system?
Yes. You will only have to purchase additional collars.

More Questions?
(502) 314-7398
www.derbysfence.com

Compare us to the others...you’ll be glad you did!

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Why Derby’s Pet Fence?

- Locally owned and operated.

- Independent installer – we recommend what is best for your situation.

- Affordable. No expensive franchise fees to subsidize.

- Free initial consultation and training.

- Professional installation of any brand.

- Choose from different brands!

- No expensive battery plans!

- Rechargeable/slim collars.

- Outstanding warranty on both installation and hardware.

- Best guarantee in the business. Best value in the industry.

- Convenient evening and Saturday hours. Monday - Saturday. 8:00 a.m. - 7:00 p.m.

- Free Estimates.


WE STAND BEHIND OUR SERVICE!

[chetzuru]

COVER:

Derby’s Pet Fence

Freedom & Safety For Your Pets, Peace Of Mind For You


(502) 314-7398
www.derbysfence.com



INTERIOR COPY:

Give Your Dog The Freedom & Safety He Deserves

Does your dog crave the boundless freedom of the big outdoors? But you
worry he’ll run off and get hit by a car, mauled by an animal…or worse?

Let Derby’s Pet Fence give your carefree canine the independence he
craves, without the worry. As an authorized dealer for many different
types of in-ground fencing, we’re able to customize a system that meets
the unique needs of your property and your pet.

So whether your dog is big or small, stubborn or easily trained – your
entire family will benefit from the peace of mind Derby’s Pet Fence can
bring. Let us install yours today!

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Everybody Wins With A Derby’s Pet Fence…


Your Dog:

• The electronic collar offers more freedom than a leash or a rope

• He doesn’t need to wait for a walk to get exercise

• Larger play area…he can roam the front yard, too!


Your Family:

• No more late night or rainy-day walks

• No more run-ins with the neighbors over dog issues

• Keeps your dog out of garden and pool areas


You:

• It’s the safe, affordable option you can trust – free training included

• All equipment and installation backed by warranty

• Peace of mind knowing your dog is secure, yet free to roam the yard!


Call for your FREE estimate today:
(502) 314-7398
www.derbysfence.com

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Frequently Asked Questions


Is an in-ground pet fence humane?

Yes! The correction administered by our products is mild – it’s often
compared to the static shock you get after walking across a carpet. Our
systems deliver an audible signal BEFORE a shock is received. So with
proper training, dogs respond to our systems and avoid the boundaries
within a matter of weeks.


Will this system work for all dogs?

Almost all dogs can be trained to stay safely in their yard with our systems.
However, there are a few breeds or circumstances that may need special
consideration. We will assess your situation before we begin any installation.


Can dogs of any age be trained with this system?

Your dog must be at least six months old. And, yes, you can teach an older
dog to stay within your yard.


Is installation safe for my lawn?

We use specialized equipment to best respect the integrity of your lawn.
In most cases, you will find it hard to see where the installation occurred
in just a few days.


Can more than one dog share the same system?

Yes. Additional collars are available for purchase and use with your system.


More Questions? Call Us:
(502) 314-7398
www.derbysfence.com


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[deckeleven]

Erin,

Another home run. Great work.

Much appreciated Erin. As you can see, I tend to think and write in bullet point factoids. This a refreshing change that I will utilize.

Steve

[onistaxu]

This is so awesome.

Erin,

Don't want to rush you ... I know how busy you must be and I think I speak for all of us when I say you've been extremely generous with your time and talents.

But I have to ask, you still planning to do mine? Did you get it? I never heard.

Thanks.

[chetzuru]

Hi Sarge!

Yes! Yours is the last one and I'm working on it this week. I got your link so everything is good to go - now I just need to find the time to do it! :-)

Cheerio,
Erin

No problem, Erin. As I said, we all appreciate your generosity.

BTW ... how much you usually charge for what you've done here for free?